I made some progress on the conclusion. It's a different approach, but consistent with the rest of my chapters. I wrote a long dialogue between us upon our return from an expedition. It's a very typical conversation we have over the hours, days and weeks following Quest. We talk about the acts of courage we witnessed, things kids did to make us proud, the disappointments, the worries about the adults, the funny classic skits that we never tire of seeing. I like it's rhythm, but I'm just not sure. I'll take it to Penelope on Sunday and see what they think.
My voice is back to about eighty percent and the congestion is much improved. It's a good thing cause there are only seven days left to finish my book!
Molly and her Christmas toy
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